Improve copy in index.astro (#480)

* Improve copy in index.astro A few changes to fix typos and make the copy on the front page read a little smoother. * Tighten project goal in index.astro
tus · Nov 26, 2024 · 3564741 · 3564741
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@@ -54,17 +54,17 @@ const press = await getCollection('press')
     <div class="mission">
       <div class="container">
         <p>
-          People are sharing more and more photos and videos every day. Mobile
-          networks remain fragile however. Platform APIs are also often a mess
-          and every project builds its own file uploader. There are a thousand
+          People are sharing more and more photos and videos every day, but 
+mobile
+          networks remain fragile. Platform APIs are often a mess and every 
+          project builds its own file uploader. There are a thousand
           one-week projects that barely work, when all we need is one real
           project. One project done right.
         </p>
 
         <p>
-          We are the ones who are going to do this right. Our aim is to solve
-          the problem of unreliable file uploads once and for all. tus is a new
-          open{' '}
+          We are going to do this right. Our aim is to make file uploads
+          reliable once and for all. tus is a new, open{' '}
           <a href="/protocols/resumable-upload.html">
             protocol for resumable uploads
           </a>{' '}
@@ -73,9 +73,9 @@ const press = await getCollection('press')
         </p>
 
         <p>
-          It may seem to be an impossible dream. Perhaps that is because no-one
-          has managed to solve it yet. Still, we are confident and we are going
-          to give it our best shot.{' '}
+          It may seem to be an impossible dream. Perhaps that is because no one
+          has solved it yet. Still, we are confident and we are going to give it
+          our best shot.{' '}
           <a target="" href="https://github.com/tus"> Join us on GitHub</a>{' '}
           and help us make the world a better place. Say "No!" to lost cat videos!
           Say "Yes!" to tus!
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ const press = await getCollection('press')
       <p>
         We are still actively improving the protocol and all of its
         implementations. We welcome your involvement and are happy to answer any
-        question!
+        questions!
       </p>
       <Social centered />
     </div>
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ const press = await getCollection('press')
       </div>
 
       <p>
-        Do you also (plan to) use tus?{' '}
+        Do you (plan to) use tus?{' '}
         <a href="https://github.com/tus/tus.io/edit/main/src/data/logos.json">
           Add your company
         </a>