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-Intro to Rust Lang (98-008) is intended to provide a swift but approachable introduction to the Rust programming language. We don't expect any previous exposure to the language, but we expect some previous background in C, and previous completion of 15-122.
+Intro to Rust Lang (98-008) is intended to provide an approachable introduction to the Rust programming language. We don't expect any previous exposure to the language, but we expect some previous background in C, equivalent to completing the course 15-122.
 
-There will be weekly homeworks that are intended to take less than an hour each, so that you have a chance to practice what we have taught in lecture for that week.
+There will be weekly homeworks that are intended to take less than an hour each so that you have a chance to practice what we have taught in lecture for that week.
 
 Please contact us with any questions or concerns, by Discord or by email. Thank you for your interest in our course!
 
 [<center>View Full Syllabus</center>](/assets/pdf/syllabus-f24.pdf)
 
 ### Previous Iterations:
 
-- [F24](/old/f24/): Benjamin Owad, Connor Tsui, and David Rudo
-- [S24](/old/s24/): Benjamin Owad, Connor Tsui, and David Rudo
-- [S22, F22, and S23](https://old-rust-stuco.duvallj.pw/): Jack Duvall and Cooper Pierce
+- [F24](/old/f24/): Benjamin Owad, Connor Tsui, David Rudo
+- [S24](/old/s24/): Benjamin Owad, Connor Tsui, David Rudo
+- [S22, F22, and S23](https://old-rust-stuco.duvallj.pw/): Jack Duvall, Cooper Pierce

index.md

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-Welcome to Intro to Rust Lang (98-008). The course will be offered in Spring 2025 by Connor Tsui and Jessica Ruan at Carnegie Mellon University. Please refer to the [about page](/about) for more information.
+Welcome to Intro to Rust Lang (98-008). The course will be offered in Spring 2025 by Connor Tsui and Jessica Ruan at Carnegie Mellon University. Please see the [about page](/about) for more!