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 # Glendon Tan - Project Portfolio Page
 
 ## Overview
-BookBob is a desktop application tailored for Dr Bob’s private General Practitioner clinic. It facilitates the storage 
+BookBob is a desktop application tailored for Doctor's private General Practitioner clinic. It facilitates the storage 
 and retrieval of patient information, including names, NRICs, genders, dates of birth, phone numbers, home addresses, 
-allergies, medical histories and visit records with details on diagnoses and prescribed medications. BookBob also helps 
-Dr Bob stay organised by tracking daily appointments and providing reminders each morning. Optimised for a Command Line 
-Interface (CLI), BookBob allows for efficient management of patient information and appointments.
+allergies, medical histories and visit records with details on diagnoses and prescribed medications. Through the usage 
+of BookBob, users will also be able to schedule appointments with their patients and receive daily reminder of the 
+appointments for the day upon login. The application is optimised for Command Line Interface (CLI), allowing for 
+efficient management of patient information and appointments.
 
 ### Summary of Contributions
 - Code Contributed: [RepoSense Link](https://nus-cs2113-ay2425s1.github.io/tp-dashboard/?search=g13nd0n)
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         - Furthermore, once added the appointment, the list of appointments will be sorted according to date and time. 
           Implementation required ensure the appointment class implements the Comparable interface and have the compareTo
           methods and sorting them out. Additionally, implementation will need to ensure that regardless the order of the 
-          appointment is added, it will be sorted appropriately
+          appointment is added, it will be sorted appropriately after the appointment has been added.
           while comparison are correct
     - Delete appointments
       - What it does: delete appointments based on the specific nric, date and time given
       - Justification: This feature improves product by allowing user to delete the appointments that might have been 
         made on accident. It requires date and time to ensure that the appointment deleted is the correct appointment.
+        The delete feature is case-insensitive for the nric when deleting the appointment.
     - List all appointments
       - What it does: List all appointments in chronological order
       - Justification: This improves the product by allowing user to look at all the appointments that has been made
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       - Justification: This feature improves the product by removing the need for user to personally delete the 
         appointments that have already passed.
       - Highlights: The appointments that are removed would be those that are before the time that the user logged off.
-        Implementations would required to check both date and time before removal and not simply removing all the 
+        Implementations would be required to check both date and time before removal and not simply removing all the 
         appointments for the day.
   - Wrote additional testing for the new features added. Included testing of methods defined in the `Appointment` and 
   `AppointmentRecord` classes. #248
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   - Added class diagram for `Appointment` and `AppointmentRecord` class
   - Added details, sequence diagram and object diagram for the Appointment Feature
   - Added information for the Glossary 
+  - Check Contributions to Developer Guide for UML diagrams
+- Contributions to team-based task :
+  - Convert the extraction of patient's details into a method since it has been used repeatedly #343
+  - Remove all the magic number when extracting patient's details #343
+  - Maintain the issue tracker
 - Review/mentoring contributions:
   - Help teammates in solving JUnit test issues e.g. System.lineSeparator() was not replaced with \n
   - Help fixed the CI issues that was accumulated over time #75
+- Contributions beyond the project team:
+  - Help to spot bugs during dry run practical
+  - Peer review given to certain groups regarding their product and Developer Guide
 
 ## Contributions to the Developer Guide
 - Appointment Class Diagram\
 ![Appointment.png](..%2FAppointment.png)
 - AppointmentRecord Class Diagram\
 ![AppointmentRecord.png](..%2FAppointmentRecord.png)
 - Object Diagram for Appointment Feature\
-![BeforeAppointmentOD.png](..%2FBeforeAppointmentOD.png)
+- ![BeforeAppointmentOD.png](..%2FBeforeAppointmentOD.png)
 ![AfterAppointmentOD.png](..%2FAfterAppointmentOD.png)
 - Sequence Diagram for Appointment Feature\
 ![NewAppointmentSD.png](..%2FNewAppointmentSD.png)