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@tulsyan21 tulsyan21 commented Oct 21, 2019

added chakr innovations

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  • The description is simple and doesn't contain unnecessary buzzwords. It needs to say what the company does, it's not a sales pitch.
    • ❌ Disruptive company developing cutting-edge AI-enabled solutions to provide farmers with a decision support system.
    • ✅ They use satellites to help farmers monitor crops and lower their emissions by reducing their nitrogen usage.

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Offers a biomaterial produced from food and vegetable waste, that can be used for packaging as an alternative to plastic. This material is translucent, resistent, and home compostable.

- [Chakr Innovation](https://chakr.in) | India | 2015

Developed world’s first retro-fit emission control device for diesel generators. This technology can capture ~90% of particulate matter emissions from the exhaust of diesel generators without causing any adverse impact on the engine, and convert it into non-toxic paints and inks.
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"world's first" sounds a bit like a sales pitch, I would just say "Developed a retro-fit..."

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right, got it

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## Research

- [Blue Sky Analytics](https://blueskyhq.in) - A Big Data and AI startup building Geospatial Data Platforms for Environmental Data.
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"Big Data and AI" is a little buzzword-y, I think you could leave that part off.

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aalises commented Dec 23, 2019

Could we squash the commits to 1 and change it for a better commit message? e.g Add Chakr Innovation and Blue Sky Analytics

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