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feat: custom air conditioning #899
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Woot thanks for the great PR! (forgot to add my intro) before sending the review. Have a couple suggestions and let me know if you have any questions!
Couple things TODO
- I can optimize images for you as 400kb is rather large. Will get on this sometime today.
- Is there any resolution method to the failures you've described? (beyond turning the failure off).
I would hazard the following (in relation to resolutions):
- If yes -> maybe include basic resolution steps in an admonition or just via a new section
- If no -> maybe include an admonition to simply state we will be bringing resolution methods or etc. at a later time
Thanks for the review @Valastiri !! I've implemented your comments and added some extra lines to break up paragraphs. I still think it looks like a lot of text and some graphs/images might help, but I don't have any ideas on what else to add 😄 Regarding your comment about the failures resolution methods. There is no way to "fix" a failed item, but I've added a comment that says |
heyo! I'll take a look tonight sorry was quite busy past couple of days. Yea that works! I wasn't entirely sure if there were should've given ya that option. That ECAM migitations sounds great! If you don't mind me committing things I'll maybe break up the text a bit and even if it's long we can iterate down the line with more media if you'd like. or we can wait. |
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Some spell-checking, will have a more in-depth read some other time when the duties allow it.
# Custom Air Conditioning System | ||
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## System Description | ||
The Air Conditioning, Pressurization and Ventilation system (also known as Environmental Control System (ECS) or simply Air Conditioning System for convenience) regulates the temperature, pressure and airflow inside the aircraft. |
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The Air Conditioning, Pressurization and Ventilation system (also known as Environmental Control System (ECS) or simply Air Conditioning System for convenience) regulates the temperature, pressure and airflow inside the aircraft. | |
The air Conditioning, pressurization and ventilation system (also known as Environmental Control System (ECS) or simply Air Conditioning System for convenience) regulates the temperature, pressure, and airflow inside the aircraft. |
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@Sleinmaster question -- you missed the capital C for the first conditioning (intentional)?
Additionally, keeping the capitilization in the second instance yes?
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went with "conditioning"
I might review this tonight and commit changes to get this ready for merge |
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will solve with rebase shortly with optimized images + some additional changes |
Co-authored-by: Sleinmaster <[email protected]>
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Summary
This PR adds a page under Feature Guides to define the "Custom Air Conditioning System", mainly needed to support PR flybywiresim/aircraft#8178 [Air Conditioning Failures].
My first contribution to docs so open to all comments and suggestions for improvement 😄. I'm not good at this kind of thing.
Location
docs/fbw-a32nx/feature-guides/custom-air-conditioning/
Discord username (if different from GitHub): mjuhe