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docs/fbw-a32nx/feature-guides/.pages

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     - Custom AP: autopilot-fbw.md
     - Custom FMS: cFMS.md
     - Custom Hydraulics: custom-hydraulics.md
+    - Custom Air Conditioning: custom-air-conditioning.md
     - ...
     - flyPadOS 3 EFB: flypados3
     - GSX Integration: gsxintegration

docs/fbw-a32nx/feature-guides/custom-air-conditioning.md

@@ -3,28 +3,28 @@
 ## System Description
 The Air Conditioning, Pressurization and Ventilation system (also known as Environmental Control System (ECS) or simply Air Conditioning System for convenience) regulates the temperature, pressure and airflow inside the aircraft. Its main functions are to maintain a high level of comfort for passengers and crew and to protect the aircraft systems that need it (like the avionics).
 
-Our aim at FBW is to model systems that match their real life counterpart one-to-one. Throughout this guide you will see items marked as “pending” or “coming soon”, that’s where we are still hard at work to bring you the most advanced Air Conditioning, Pressurization and Ventilation system you’ve ever seen in a home simulator. Please note this guide doesn’t go through all conditions that trigger this or that situation, you are encouraged to discover these details yourself as you fly along the open skies!
+Our aim at FBW is to model systems that match their real life counterpart one-to-one. Throughout this guide you will see items marked as “not yet implemented” or “coming soon”, that’s where we are still hard at work to bring you the most advanced Air Conditioning, Pressurization and Ventilation system you’ve ever seen in a home simulator. Please note this guide doesn’t go through all conditions that trigger this or that situation, you are encouraged to discover these details yourself as you fly along the open skies!
 
 ## Cabin Simulation
-The first step in order to be able to simulate the Air Conditioning system is to simulate a virtual cabin. Microsoft Flight Simulator doesn’t provide a default implementation for the air inside of the cockpit and cabin, so we’ve developed this ourselves. Now for every “tick” in the simulator, we are running a separate fluid simulation inside of the fuselage that accurately mimics air behaviour in real life. Some of the details and features of this simulation include:
+The first step in order to be able to simulate the Air Conditioning system is to simulate a virtual cabin. Microsoft Flight Simulator doesn’t provide a default implementation for the air inside of the cockpit and cabin, so we’ve developed this ourselves. For every “tick” in the simulator, the A32NX runs a separate fluid simulation inside of the fuselage that accurately mimics air behaviour in real life. Some of the details and features of this simulation include:
 
 - Heat exchange through aircraft walls (conduction, convection). Heat exchange with environment is affected by:
     - Exterior and interior temperature
-    - Exterior and interior density
+    - Exterior and interior air density
     - Aircraft altitude
     - Aircraft speed (Reynolds number)
     - Turbulent vs Laminar flow (Nusselt number)
     - Material and thickness of sidewall
-- Heat generation in the cabin. This is calculated based on the number of passengers, taking heat loss through skin and through lungs.
-- Air Mass exchange between aircraft and environment. This is mainly through the outflow valve but also:
+- Heat generation in the cabin. This is calculated based on the number of passengers, using human body heat loss through skin and through lungs.
+- Air Mass exchange between aircraft and environment. Air leaves the fuselage mainly through the outflow valve but is also affected by:
     - Any open doors
     - Air leakage due to passengers using the toilet (!)
     - Aircraft speed and pressure differential (supersonic, transonic or subsonic flow through the outflow valve)
 
-!!! tip "Did you know?"
-    The flow of air that escapes through the outflow valve is not constant. Try to fly up to cruise altitude and manually open the outflow valve. You will notice the cabin vertical speed jump at some point as you get close to equal pressure. This is due to the flow transitioning from supersonic to subsonic.
+!!! tip "Did You Know?"
+    The flow of air that escapes through the outflow valve is not constant. Try to fly up to cruise altitude and manually open the outflow valve. You will notice the cabin vertical speed "jump" at some point as you get close to equal pressure. This is due to the flow transitioning from supersonic to subsonic.
 
-!!! info "Coming Soon"
+!!! info "Not Yet Implemented"
     Other details that can be added in the future include:
 
     - Radiation exchange with the environment (so the cabin warms up in a sunny but cold day, for example)
@@ -35,9 +35,9 @@ The first step in order to be able to simulate the Air Conditioning system is to
 The air conditioning system of the A320 is better understood by following an air particle through its journey from the bleed system to the cabin.
 
 ### Air Conditioning Packs
-Air from the bleed system is hot. It comes directly from the engines or APU and it needs to be cooled down before it can be delivered to the cabin. This happens in the packs, which are heat exchangers that cool and dry the air. The packs target the minimum temperature selected on the overhead panel. The packs can be turned off with their respective pushbutton on the overhead panel, but their intake valve also closes in a few other situations, like when the engines are off or when the ditching pushbutton is pressed in.
+Air from the bleed system is hot. It comes directly from the engines or APU and it needs to be cooled down before it can be delivered to the cabin. This happens in the packs, which are heat exchangers that cool and dry the air. The packs regulate their output temperature to target the minimum temperature selected on the overhead panel. The packs can be turned off with their respective pushbutton on the overhead panel, but their intake valve also closes in a few other situations, like when the engines are off or when the ditching pushbutton is pressed in.
 
-!!! info "Coming Soon"
+!!! info "Not Yet Implemented"
     The inner workings of the packs haven’t been modelled yet in the A32NX but they are in the works!
 
 ### Cabin Fans
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ Two big cabin fans (plus their respective filters) recirculate part of the cabin
 ### Mixer Unit
 This is where the air from the packs and the cabin fans gets mixed (the name is pretty self explanatory!).
 
-!!! info "Coming Soon"
+!!! info "Not Yet Implemented"
     Some airports provide low pressure conditioned air so aircraft don’t need to keep their APU on for extended periods of time in hot weather. This air is routed directly to the mixer unit, but this is not simulated yet in the A32NX.
 
 ### Trim Air
@@ -55,14 +55,15 @@ We’ve stablished that the packs deliver the minimum temperature selected on th
 ### Air Conditioning System Controller (ACSC)
 The Air Conditioning System Controller is a dual channel, dual lane system that controls all elements of the Air Conditioning System. When a zone temperature is selected on the overhead, it calculates the temperature demand and air flow required in the cabin outlets to achieve it. It send signals to all the moving parts of the system (described above!) to achieve the right balance and meet the temperature and flow demands.
 
-!!! tip "Did you know?"
+!!! tip "Did You Know?"
     The ACSC is an Airbus optional system for the A320. Some A320s come with individual local controllers for each of the elements (temperature, flow, trim air…). We’ve modelled the A32NX to come equipped with an ACSC, because why not!
 
 ### Controls and Indications
 TODO
 
 ## Failures
-We’ve implemented the most relevant failures to the Air Conditioning system components. Here is a list and what you can expect to see when you activate them:
+We’ve implemented the most relevant failures to the Air Conditioning system components. Here is a list and what you can expect to see when you activate them.
+
 What you can fail:
 
 - ACSC 1 & 2 (each lane individually)
@@ -76,9 +77,9 @@ What to expect for each of them:
 - ACSC -> One lane fault: No effect as the second lane takes over. You will see a “COND CTL 1(2)-A(B) FAULT” ECAM warning (no chime) if you have engines off, otherwise no warning.
 - ACSC -> Two lane fault: The related pack is lost, and the hot air pressure-regulating valve and trim air valves close. You will get a “AIR PACK 1(2) FAULT” ECAM warning (single chime). Temperature regulation is lost.
 - Trim Air Pressure Regulating Valve: The “hot air” valve is stuck in position. If it fails open this has no effect. If it fails closed temperature optimisation is lost. You will only get a “HOT AIR FAULT” when the valve disagrees with the commanded position (note it takes a while to get the warning!). The FAULT light illuminates on the overhead.
-- Trim Air System High Pressure: Hot air pressure increases but no observable effect. You will get a “COND TRIM AIR SYS FAULT” and “TRIM AIR HI PR” ECAM message (no chime).
+- Trim Air System High Pressure: Hot air pressure increases but it has no observable effect. You will get a “COND TRIM AIR SYS FAULT” and “TRIM AIR HI PR” ECAM message (no chime).
 - [ZONE] Trim Air Valve: Optimised temperature regulation of the corresponding zone is lost. You will get a “COND TRIM AIR SYS FAULT” and “[ZONE] TRIM VALVE” ECAM message (no chime).
-- [ZONE] Duct Overheat: The duct temperature rises above 88C. The TAPRV and trim air valves close. Temperature optimization is lost. You will get a “COND FWD CAB/AFT CAB/CKPT DUCT OVHT” ECAM warning (single chime).
-!!! tip "If you like to see things burn you can fail the TAPRV open, then trigger an overheat and see what happens 😛."
+- [ZONE] Duct Overheat: The duct temperature rises above 88C momentarily. The TAPRV and trim air valves close. Temperature optimization is lost. You will get a “COND FWD CAB/AFT CAB/CKPT DUCT OVHT” ECAM warning (single chime).
 - Cabin Fan: One cabin fan failure reduces the recirculated flow, if both fail there is no air recirculation. You can see an amber “FAN” message appear in the COND page. You will get a “COND L+R CAB FAN FAULT” alert if both fail.
-- Lav and Galley Fan: Cabin zone temperature sensors are ventilated by the air extracted by the fan. Cabin zone temperature regulation is lost. You will get a “COND LAV + GALLEY FAN FAULT” ECAM warning (single chime).
+- Lav and Galley Fan: Cabin zone temperature sensors are ventilated by the air extracted by this fan. Cabin zone temperature regulation is lost. You will get a “COND LAV + GALLEY FAN FAULT” ECAM warning (single chime).
+!!! tip "If you like to see things burn you can fail the TAPRV open, then trigger an overheat and see what happens 😛."