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docs/mix4snow/index.md

@@ -12,24 +12,23 @@ Mix four snowflakes
 ===================
 
 The colors of the hexagons match the thread diagram.
-The pair diagram has a [color code] that caters for unorthodox stitches.
+The pair diagram has a [color code] that can express unorthodox stitches.
 
 [color code]: /GroundForge-help/color-rules
 [saved PDF]: /GroundForge-help/clips/print-as-pdf
 
 <script>{% include mix4snow/hexa.js %}</script>
 {% include mix4snow/hexa.html %}
 
-* Click one of the hexagons to replace the corresponding group in the diagrams with the recipe.
-* Click an image below to select its recipe.<!-- true: start left -->  
-[![diamond](diamond.png)](javascript:recipe('tcl,rctc,crl,r',true) "family 456123") &nbsp;
-[![star](star.png)](javascript:recipe('tc,rclcrc,clcrcl,ct',true) "family 321") &nbsp;
-[![leaning crossed spider](leaning-spider.png)](javascript:recipe('ctc,ctcl,ctc,ctc',true) "family 651234") &nbsp;
-[![ring │](ring-s.png)](javascript:recipe('cr,ctc,ctc,lc',false) "family 321") &nbsp;
-[![ring ╱](ring-e.png)](javascript:recipe('cl,ctc,ctc,rc',false) "family 321") &nbsp;
-[![triangle.png](triangle.png)](javascript:recipe('tctc,rctc,ctcl,t',true) "family 321") &nbsp;
-[![weaving 4x4](weaving-4x4.png)](javascript:recipe('crc,crclctc,ctcrc,rcl,c,c',false) "family 123") &nbsp;
-[![spider with 2 heads](spider-2heads.png)](javascript:recipe('lc,crc,ctc,lcrcl,ctc,crc,c,r',false) "family 623451") &nbsp;
-
-See the <a href="/GroundForge-help/snow-mix" target="_blank">tutorial</a>
-for more information and (how to create) more recipes.
+* Select a recipe with a click on one of the following images.<!-- true: start left -->  
+  [![diamond](diamond.png)](javascript:recipe('tcl,rctc,crl,r',true) "family 456123") &nbsp;
+  [![star](star.png)](javascript:recipe('tc,rclcrc,clcrcl,ct',true) "family 321") &nbsp;
+  [![leaning crossed spider](leaning-spider.png)](javascript:recipe('ctc,ctcl,ctc,ctc',true) "family 651234") &nbsp;
+  [![ring │](ring-s.png)](javascript:recipe('cr,ctc,ctc,lc',false) "family 321") &nbsp;
+  [![ring ╱](ring-e.png)](javascript:recipe('cl,ctc,ctc,rc',false) "family 321") &nbsp;
+  [![triangle.png](triangle.png)](javascript:recipe('tctc,rctc,ctcl,t',true) "family 321") &nbsp;
+  [![weaving 4x4](weaving-4x4.png)](javascript:recipe('crc,crclctc,ctcrc,rcl,c,c',false) "family 123") &nbsp;
+  [![spider with 2 heads](spider-2heads.png)](javascript:recipe('lc,crc,ctc,lcrcl,ctc,crc,c,r',false) "family 623451") &nbsp;
+* Apply a recipe with a click one of the hexagons.
+* See the <a href="/GroundForge-help/snow-mix" target="_blank">tutorial</a>
+to change recipes, create new recipes and more subjects.