Update digital.md #157
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@njr2128 @tcatapano I've made some revisions.
My only outstanding question is whether we should mention Performant Software's part in it somewhere? I put in Performant Software for one of the "we"s in the last section, but if it remains, we need to describe what it refers to! Also, it is not entirely clear who the "we" is in the last section. It's written from Performant's perspective, but we don't say anything about Performant, so that needs to be changed, I think. Also, the formality of the language in the last section differs from the rest - I changed a bit, but we could do more.
#155 , #156