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 ==Setting up a bus service==
 Let's build one of the simplest types of transport available to you; a passenger transport service by road (otherwise known as a bus). 
 ===Finding a suitable location===
-Hold down the right button and drag the mouse to move around the map. Look for a group of houses - this is a [[en/Manual/Towns]]. Each town has its name displayed in the middle of it, followed by a number in brackets indicating its population. Try to find a town of 500 inhabitants or greater.
+Hold down the right button and drag the mouse to move around the map. Look for a group of houses - this is a [[en/Manual/Towns|town]]. Each town has its name displayed in the middle of it, followed by a number in brackets indicating its population. Try to find a town with 500 inhabitants or more.
 {{en/Phototable|[[File:en/Manual/Tutorial bus 1.png|400px|A town]]|A town|none}}
 
 ===Building bus stations===
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 <ol start="3">
 <li>Look for a free tile next to a road, near to some houses. 
-<li>Click the correct orientation button so that your bus station will have its entrance facing the road.
+<li>Choose the correct orientation for the station so that it will have its entrance facing the road.
 <li>Left-click on your chosen tile to build the bus station there. You'll notice a red number floating up, which indicates the amount of money you just spent. If you get the orientation right, you'll also notice the road is extended into your bus station.
 <li>Repeat this procedure for another bus station in a different part of the town.
 </ol>
 {{en/Phototable|[[File:en/Manual/Tutorial bus 4.png|400px]]|After building both bus stations.|none|6=:}}
 
 ===Buying a bus===
-To move passengers between these two stations you obviously need to have a bus. [[en/Manual/Base Set/Road Vehicles/Buses]] (and all other vehicles) are built in [[en/Manual/Depots]].
+To move passengers between these two stations you obviously need to have a bus. [[en/Manual/Base Set/Road Vehicles/Buses]] (and all other vehicles) are built in [[en/Manual/Depots|depots]].
 #Build a road vehicle depot by clicking the ''Depot'' button [[File:en/Manual/Tutorial/RVDPT.png]] in the ''Road construction toolbar'', and follow the same procedure as with the bus stations. Try to build it close to either of the bus stations but it doesn't matter if it's not surrounded by houses this time.
 #Click on your newly built depot. The depot menu will appear, and you will get an overview of all the vehicles in there - currently none. We can change that by buying a bus!
-#Choose the ''New Vehicles'' button at the bottom of the depot. Another screen will open, this time listing all the vehicles available to you at this moment. At the top you will find the bus - an ''MPS Regal'' bus to be precise.
+#Click the ''New Vehicles'' button at the bottom of the depot. Another screen will open, this time listing all the vehicles available to you at this moment. At the top you will find the ''MPS Regal'' bus.
 {{en/Phototable|[[File:en/Manual/Tutorial bus 5.png]]|Inside the depot...|none|6=:}}
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 <li>Click the bus to select it and then click ''Buy Vehicle''. A new vehicle window will appear.
-<li>Now your bus is built and ready to take orders. You don't need the ''Depot'' window anymore for now, so click on the x in its top-left corner.
+<li>Now your bus has been bought and is ready to take orders. You don't need the ''Depot'' window anymore, so click on the x in its top-left corner to close it.
 </ol>
 
 ===Giving orders to your bus===