Use the 'device sensor' term in the Scope section #309
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| to specifying primitives which enable expose data from [=device sensors=]. | |||
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enable user agent to expose data or enable exposure of the data, maybe something else 😄, enable expose sounds strange.
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The 'device sensor' term is defined and used within the specification. Using it in the Scope section instead of 'local sensor' makes this section consistent with the rest of the specification contents and also more clear. This patch is a part of the effort for fixing the [TAG review issues](w3c#303).
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The 'device sensor' term is defined and used within the
specification. Using it in the Scope section instead of
'local sensor' makes this section consistent with the rest
of the specification contents and also more clear.
This patch is a part of the effort for fixing the
TAG review issues.
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