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diff --git a/joss-paper/paper.bib b/joss-paper/paper.bib
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--- a/joss-paper/paper.bib
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@@ -299,3 +299,41 @@ @ARTICLE{Schosser2024
        adsurl = {https://ui.adsabs.harvard.edu/abs/2024arXiv240104174S},
       adsnote = {Provided by the SAO/NASA Astrophysics Data System}
 }
+
+@ARTICLE{Liu2020,
+       author = {{Liu}, Adrian and {Shaw}, J. Richard},
+        title = "{Data Analysis for Precision 21 cm Cosmology}",
+      journal = {\pasp},
+     keywords = {dark ages, reionization, first stars, methods: statistical, techniques: interferometric, Astrophysics - Instrumentation and Methods for Astrophysics, Astrophysics - Cosmology and Nongalactic Astrophysics},
+         year = 2020,
+        month = jun,
+       volume = {132},
+       number = {1012},
+          eid = {062001},
+        pages = {062001},
+          doi = {10.1088/1538-3873/ab5bfd},
+archivePrefix = {arXiv},
+       eprint = {1907.08211},
+ primaryClass = {astro-ph.IM},
+       adsurl = {https://ui.adsabs.harvard.edu/abs/2020PASP..132f2001L},
+      adsnote = {Provided by the SAO/NASA Astrophysics Data System}
+}
+
+@ARTICLE{jwst,
+       author = {{Castellano}, Marco and {Fontana}, Adriano and {Treu}, Tommaso and {Santini}, Paola and {Merlin}, Emiliano and {Leethochawalit}, Nicha and {Trenti}, Michele and {Vanzella}, Eros and {Mestric}, Uros and {Bonchi}, Andrea and {Belfiori}, Davide and {Nonino}, Mario and {Paris}, Diego and {Polenta}, Gianluca and {Roberts-Borsani}, Guido and {Boyett}, Kristan and {Brada{\v{c}}}, Maru{\v{s}}a and {Calabr{\`o}}, Antonello and {Glazebrook}, Karl and {Grillo}, Claudio and {Mascia}, Sara and {Mason}, Charlotte and {Mercurio}, Amata and {Morishita}, Takahiro and {Nanayakkara}, Themiya and {Pentericci}, Laura and {Rosati}, Piero and {Vulcani}, Benedetta and {Wang}, Xin and {Yang}, Lilan},
+        title = "{Early Results from GLASS-JWST. III. Galaxy Candidates at z  9-15}",
+      journal = {\apjl},
+     keywords = {Reionization, 1383, Astrophysics - Astrophysics of Galaxies},
+         year = 2022,
+        month = oct,
+       volume = {938},
+       number = {2},
+          eid = {L15},
+        pages = {L15},
+          doi = {10.3847/2041-8213/ac94d0},
+archivePrefix = {arXiv},
+       eprint = {2207.09436},
+ primaryClass = {astro-ph.GA},
+       adsurl = {https://ui.adsabs.harvard.edu/abs/2022ApJ...938L..15C},
+      adsnote = {Provided by the SAO/NASA Astrophysics Data System}
+}
diff --git a/joss-paper/paper.md b/joss-paper/paper.md
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 # Summary
 
 The 21cm line of neutral hydrogen is a powerful probe of the high-redshift
-universe, and is the subject of a number of current and upcoming
+universe (Cosmic Dawn and the Epoch of Reionization), with an unprecedented potential to
+inform us about key processes of early galaxy formation, the first stars and even
+cosmology and structure formation [@Liu2020], via intensity mapping.
+It is the subject of a number of current and upcoming
 low-frequency radio experiments, including the MWA [@mwa], LOFAR [@lofar], HERA [@hera]
-and the SKA [@Pritchard2015].
+and the SKA [@Pritchard2015], which complement the detailed information concerning the
+brightest sources in these early epochs from powerful optical and near-infrared telescopes
+such as the JWST [@jwst].
+
+
 21cmSense is a Python package that provides a modular framework for calculating the
 sensitivity of these experiments, in order to enhance the process of their design.
 This paper presents version v2.0.0 of 21cmSense, which has been re-written from the ground up
@@ -48,14 +55,14 @@ key assumptions to accelerate the calculation:
 
 1. Each baseline (pair of antennas) in the interferometer intrinsically measures a dense
    blob of 2D spatial Fourier modes of the sky intensity distribution, centred at a
-   particular Fourier  coordinate *(u,v)* given by the displacement vector between the
-   antennas forming the baseline, and covering an area in this *(u,v)*-space that is given
+   particular Fourier  coordinate $(u,v)$ given by the displacement vector between the
+   antennas forming the baseline, and covering an area in this $(u,v)$-space that is given
    by the Fourier-transform of the primary beam of the instrument.
    The Fourier-space representation of the sky is thus
-   built up by collecting many baselines that cover the so-called "*(u,v)*-plane".
+   built up by collecting many baselines that cover the so-called "$(u,v)$-plane".
    ``21cmSense`` approximates this process of synthesising many baselines by
-   nearest-grid-point interpolation onto a regular grid in the *(u,v)*-plane.
-   Furthermore, importantly the *(u,v)*-grid is chosen to have cells that are comparable
+   nearest-grid-point interpolation onto a regular grid in the $(u,v)$-plane.
+   Furthermore, importantly the $(u,v)$-grid is chosen to have cells that are comparable
    to the instrument's Fourier-space beam size, so that a particular baseline essentially
    measures a single cell in the grid, and no more.
    This maximizes resolution while keeping the covariance between cells small.
@@ -86,7 +93,17 @@ Some of the key new features introduced in this version of 21cmSense include:
 7. Built-in profiles for several major experiments: MWA, HERA and SKA-1. These can be
    used as-is, or as a starting point for defining a custom instrument.
 
+An example of the predicted sensitivity of the HERA experiment after a year's observation
+at $z=8.5$ is shown in Figure \ref{sense}, corresponding to the sampling of the $(u,v)$-grid
+shown in Figure \ref{uvsampling}. The sensivity here is a signal-to-noise,
+assuming a signal magnitude computed using a semi-numerical model from the 21cmFAST
+code [@21cmfast], using parameters from [@Munoz22].
+This figure also demonstrates that the new
+21cmSense is capable of producing sensitivity predictions in the cylindrically-averaged
+2D power spectrum space, which is helpful for upcoming experiments.
 
+![Sampling of the $(u,v)$-plane for the HERA experiment during a full year of observations.]{label="uvsampling"}(uv-sampling.png)
+![Predicted sensitivity of 1000 hours (one year) of HERA observations, as a function of perpendicular and line-of-sight fourier scale. The sensitivity is represented as the signal-to-noise on each $k$-mode, assuming a particular astrophysical model.]{label="sense"}(2dps.png)
 
 # Statement of need
 
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