diff --git a/joss-paper/paper.md b/joss-paper/paper.md index 2f76b67..a35342e 100644 --- a/joss-paper/paper.md +++ b/joss-paper/paper.md @@ -95,16 +95,15 @@ Some of the key new features introduced in this version of 21cmSense include: An example of the predicted sensitivity of the HERA experiment after a year's observation at $z=8.5$ is shown in Figure \ref{sense}, corresponding to the sampling of the $(u,v)$-grid -shown in Figure \ref{uvsampling}. The sensivity here is a signal-to-noise, -assuming a signal magnitude computed using a semi-numerical model from the 21cmFAST -code [@Mesinger2011; @Murray2020], using parameters from [@Munoz2022]. +shown in Figure \ref{uvsampling}. The sensivity here is represented as a "noise power" +(i.e. the contribution to the power spectrum from thermal noise). This figure also demonstrates that the new 21cmSense is capable of producing sensitivity predictions in the cylindrically-averaged 2D power spectrum space, which is helpful for upcoming experiments. ![Sampling of the $(u,v)$-plane for the HERA experiment during a full year of observations.\label{uvsampling}](uv-sampling.pdf) -![Predicted sensitivity of 1000 hours (one year) of HERA observations, as a function of perpendicular and line-of-sight fourier scale. The sensitivity is represented as the signal-to-noise on each $k$-mode, assuming a particular astrophysical model.\label{sense}](2dps.pdf) +![Predicted noise-power of 1000 hours (one year) of HERA observations, as a function of perpendicular and line-of-sight fourier scale. The noise-power is represented for each $k$-model.\label{sense}](2dps.pdf) # Statement of need