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情景练习

What are the benefits to having police officers in the community?

  • 保卫社区安全,控制犯罪率,预防犯罪,增加犯罪成本(罪犯会三思而后行)
  • 但是会增加社区开支,不过这是划算的,因为一次犯罪造成的损失远大于维护成本/举例
  • 增加社区群众安全感,有利于社区正常运转
  1. police officers can protect the community,prevent the criminal,and control the criminial rate,Cause,the potencial crimnials will think twice when the evil idea born in their mind

Police officers can protect the community, prevent crime, and control the crime rate. Potential criminals will think twice before committing a crime when they see a strong law enforcement presence.

  • 不知道怎么用the
  • 犯罪的想法 可翻译成 thought of committing a crime/criminal intent/the idea of breaking the law
    • when criminal intent arises in their mind 相当少见
  • 想法产生 可由 crosses their mind/occur to someone 组成
  1. though it may increase the charge of community,but it's worthful, the cost of damage by a criminal for more than the the cost of maintaining security

Though it may increase community expenses, it is worth it because the damage caused by a single crime often far exceeds the cost of maintaining security.

  • charge 和 expenses的区别 charge 收费 expense 开销
  • worthful ---> worthwhile worth是形容词 "It is worth + 名词" It's worth it / it's worthwhile
  • though 和 but 不能同时使用
  • the financial cost of damage" / "the economic impact of damage 也对
  • the cost of the damage不对/ cost 不单单指的是经济效益,如果只是形容damage容易形成误解
    • "the cost of living" 正确 习惯默认 living 是经济living。文化差异导致
  • The financial losses caused by crime
  • maintaining security 维护安全------> Keeping the community safe --------> Ensuring safety
  • far exceed the cost of 远超 xxxx 的花费 be much greater than, saves more in the long run, outweigh
  1. the presence of police officer can rise which benefit the running of community

The presence of police officers can enhance the sense of security, which benefits the smooth functioning of the community.

  • enhance the sense of security ------> Make people feel safer -------> Boost people's sense of security
    • Improve safety
    • Help people feel more secure
  • the running of the community 对的 The proper functioning of the community也是对的
    • running smoothly
  • 口语化表达
    • Police officers on patrol help create a sense of safety, keeping the community running smoothly.
    • 有利于 ---> keep/help

额外补充

make the community a safer place to live.

Give someone a chance.

Provide the team support.

Many women are earning more money now; does it mean that they can become leaders?

  • 当然可以,不过性别差异依然存在
  • 男性比女性更有精力,男性不需要生孩子,职业生涯更加流畅
  • 男性女性有着不同的教育模式,男性更偏向冒险,女性更加偏向安稳
  • 男性的力量感会影响到影响力
  • 现存情况下,头脑上的策略远胜过体力劳动
  1. Of course, but there are still gender differences.

Of course, but gender differences still exist 可以取代 ,表达更加简洁

Gender difference 表示体力上的差异

Gender gap 表示社会经济上的差距

更加口语化的表达

"Gender differences exist."(性别差异存在。)✔ 最自然,简单直白

"Gender differences are still there."(性别差异仍然存在。)✔ 口语化,较随意

"You can still see gender differences."(你仍然可以看到性别差异。)✔ 更具互动性

"Gender differences are real."(性别差异确实存在。)✔ 强调真实性

"Gender differences are still a thing."(性别差异仍然是个问题/现象。)✔ 更随意,更口语化

  1. male are more energetic than female, male don't have to give birth ,they have a more smoother career

Males have more energy than females. Males don’t have to give birth, so they have a smoother career.

  1. Male and female have different pattern of education, so they have dfference perferomce when they get to work,such as male tend to work with higher risk, while female tend to have concrete job

Men and women have different educational patterns, which lead to differences in their work performance. For example, men tend to take on higher-risk jobs, while women prefer more stable positions.

  • such as 和 For example 的区别

    • such as
  • "have different pattern of education""have different educational patterns"

    • educational patterns更加自然 得注意使用形容词,减少of这种类似的介词
  • "When they get to work" 语义不清晰,容易误解为 "到达工作地点"。更自然的表达是 "in their work performance"

  • "Concrete job" 语义不够准确,"concrete" 是 "具体的" 的意思,而你想表达的是 "稳定的" 工作,所以用 "more stable positions" 更自然。

    • Women usually go for jobs that are more stable and secure.
    • Women often prefer jobs that offer more security and stability.
    • "Steady jobs"Women tend to prefer steady jobs.
    • secure job ---------------> Insecure job
    词汇 适用场景
    Insecure job 强调工作缺乏保障,可能随时失业
    Temporary job 强调是短期工作,如合同工、实习
    Freelance job 强调自由职业,不固定
  • so 和 which lead to

    • which lead to 更加正式
  1. The physical strength can make a differecne in influence

Physical strength can make a difference in a person's influence.

  • Physical strength can impact a person's influence.
  • "Being physically strong can help a man be more influential."(身体强壮能让男人更有影响力。)
  • "His physical strength can have a big impact on his influence."
  1. In nowadays,in the importance of stategy weighout the manual work

Nowadays, the importance of strategy outweighs manual work.

  • 不需要加 in 在 Nowadays 之前

小记 2025-1-22

效果很好,发现还要记住很多固定的词组,比如工作,performce of job,secure job, steady job,stable postion

词组的本质是 形容词+名词 educational pattern 和 pattern of education 前者更加自然。

也知道了,简化的说法,比如there be 有些时候不如 直接点的 is there ,exist

未来的学习,重在口语,轻在写作。原因是我大多数情况下能看懂,且口语化的写作影响不大

两天的努力就有明显的效果,努力努力

Do you think there's any difference between males and females when it comes to choosing a future carrer?

  • 男性在养育孩子上往往会花费更少的时间,所以他们一般会选择收入更高的工作
  • 相反的,女性在家陪孩子需要花费大量的时间和精力,需要稳定和相对轻松的工作
  1. Man always spend fewer time with fostering the children, so in nomally,they will choose high-piad job
  2. On the contrary female always have to spend more time and energy to take care of the children, they need a more relax job like clerical work

"Men generally spend less time raising children, so they usually choose higher-paying jobs."

"On the other hand, women often have to spend more time and energy taking care of the children, so they need a more relaxed job, like clerical work."

  1. "On the contrary" → "On the other hand"
  2. female always have to" → "women often have to"
  3. "spend more time and energy to take care of" → "spend more time and energy taking care of"
  4. "relax job" → "relaxed job"
  5. manual job <> intellectual work

Do you think you will take advice from older people?

  • 老人有很多社会经验,待人接物,生活经验
  • 但是具体问题具体分析,要思考老人建议背后的逻辑
  • 老人对语言和事务的理解随着年龄或多或少会有些下降,不一定能很好的理解现代社会
  • 很多老人是固执的,老人不愿意冒险
  • 但很多老人财务状况良好,在金钱的帮助下,他们能看到更多
  1. Older people have more social experience , they often do better in treating people,have a comfortable live

Older people have more social experience, so they are often better at interacting with others and tend to live more comfortably.

  1. 和人打交道 interacting with others(与人互动) / deal with people /Work with people(和人一起工作)
  2. social experience 不常用 应该用 life experience
  3. do better in 和 are better at , are better at 更加口语化
  1. But if i get advice from older people, uausally,I would try to firgure out the logic behind their advice.

"But if I get advice from older people, I usually try to figure out the logic behind their advice." 基本正确

口语化表达 "But, you’ve got to take each situation on its own and think about the logic behind what older people are saying."

  1. Older people more or less decrese the ablity of comprehensing or analayze things,they may can't understand social nowaday

"As people get older, their ability to comprehend and analyze things may decrease, and they might not fully understand today's society."

  1. more or less 用 may取代
  2. Older people more or less decrease 是错的, 因为老人不可能减少
    1. Older people experience a decrease in their ability
    2. Ability decreases with age
    3. 以后造句时,就要想明白主体是什么,是能力还是老人
  3. Nowadays 后必跟比对,Today's 就是纯粹的今天的生活
  4. 理解 fully understand
  1. Many older people are strubbron, they don't like to take risks

Many older people are stubborn, and they don't like to take risks.

  1. Many older people have good financail situation.With help of money,they can see a brighter world

Many older people have a good financial situation. With the help of money, they can see more opportunities.

口语化:A lot of older people are doing well financially. With money, they can enjoy a better life.

  1. He/She is wealthy
  2. can see a brighter world表示前景光明/see more opportunities.眼界更广
    1. See the world in a different light 不同视角
    2. Have a bigger view of the world

额外补充

  • fit into the modern world 适应现代社会
  • Make a rash decision 做事毛躁
    • Make a snap decision 同义
    • make decisions lightly 同义
  • I never make decisions easily because I know everything around me is not easy to come by
    • 我从不轻易做决定,因为我知道我身边的一切都来之不易
    • come by 获得
    • come by 更加口语轻松 attain是指需要努力去获得 Acquire 更加学术,有计划的获得,类似attain
      • She acquired a lot of knowledge during her studies.
      • He acquired a new skill through constant practice
  • 跟不上时代
    • falling behind
    • Be outdated
    • Older people are falling behind the times
    • Older people can't keep up with the times.
    • Older people are out of touch with the times.

小记 2025-1-23

  1. 今天的翻译顺畅了很多,很多基本都是词汇错误,可以预见未来所花费时间会越来越少
  2. 见到了许多词伙,感觉有些词伙没必要记住,还是应该记住 好记 的哪些词,先让自己能够简单表达
  3. 下次得做一个Prompt优化,让AI能够迅速,得出语法错误,并给出最口语化的表达,和其他形式
  4. 得有一个简单的英语工具,辅助沟通(telegram bot)

Do you think the government should subsidise all university students?

  • 是的,因为穷困的学生无法支付起学费
  • 贫穷的学生往往接受更差的教育资源,他们拼尽全力也只能到一个相对还不错的大学
  • 补助差学校的学生,对于社会来说,收益可能更高。
  • 差的学校的学生往往拿到的教育资源过少,而教育资源又都集中在少数人身上,这是一种浪费
  • 差学校的学生提高的素质,是社会的隐性财富
  • 通过打零工和节约开销来负担学费,会影响学生的学习效率
  1. yes,because the student from not wealth family can't afford the cost of education
  1. wealthy adj /not wealthy family 口语中不常见

Yes, because the student from a poor family can't afford the cost of education.

  1. poor student have less educational resourse, because of this, few of them can only get relative good collage , even thought they have try their best.

"Poor students often have access to fewer educational resources, and as a result, few of them can only get into relatively good colleges, even though they try their best."

  1. Poor students 复数形式
  2. have less educational resourse 改成 have access to fewer educational resources
  3. "relative good" 应该是 "relatively good",是副词修饰形容词。
  4. "get into" 更常用来表达“进入”大学。

口语化:

Poor students often don’t have as many educational resources, so most of them can only get into decent colleges, even though they try really hard.

  1. 相对多可以用as many
  2. relatively good 可以改成 decent/pretty good
  • "End up" 在口语中更常见,特别是当你想描述意外的结局或过程中的变化时。
  • "Finally" 更偏向强调时间顺序长时间后的结果,它在口语中也常用,但使用频率略低于 "end up"

如果你在描

end up 可以代替 so,表示最终

  1. Giving poor students help,for social, is more worth

Supporting underprivileged students offers good value for society.

Helping disadvantaged students is cost-effective for society.

Helping poor students is a smart investment for society

  1. The student in bad school often get fewer resource, the education resource end up accumalete the few people, it's kind of wasting of education resource

Students in poor schools get way fewer resources, while most of them go to just a few people. That’s such a waste.

Students in bad schools often receive fewer resources, while educational resources end up accumulating in the hands of a few people. This is a waste of educational resources.

  1. end up doing.
  2. accumalete 要加介词 accumalete among 在人手中
    1. The money accumulated into a large sum.
  3. It's kind of a waste 即可
  1. 不会

Improving the quality of students in underprivileged schools is an implicit asset for society.

口语化表达 Improving the quality of students in struggling schools is like hidden wealth for society.

口语化表达 Improving the quality of students in struggling schools is like a hidden treasure for society

  1. Earning money by taking parttime job and reduce the cost of esttential to endure the cost of edution can reduce the quantity of learning.

Earning money by taking a part-time job and reducing essential expenses to afford education can reduce the amount of time available for studying.

口语化Working a part-time job and cutting back on essentials to pay for school can take away from study time

Pay tuition fees 支付学费

pay for 例句

Pay for food(支付食物的费用)

Pay for a meal(支付一顿饭的钱)

Pay for a ticket(支付票价)

Pay for rent(支付租金)

Do you think it is necessary for the government to invest in the film industry

  • 应该投资,电影据说比较赚钱
  • 可以控制舆论,现在一堆网红明星说的话容易扭曲孩子的价值观
  • 可以帮助文娱产业发展,因为拍一部片子需要大量的钱、
  • 可以有效传播和记录传统文化
  • 但政府不应该投资过多,还会有其他要投资的地方
  • 投资可以帮助有理想的制作人
  1. Yes, It's heard that film industry is easy to make money
  2. Goverment control the xxx in some level,Some
  3. It can help the develpment of entertainment,because it expense a lots of money making a film
  4. It can help express and record the traditional culture
  5. But the government shouldn't inverst too much in this, There are lots of things can be invested
  6. Investment can help some poor film maker

"Yeah, I’ve heard that the film industry can make a lot of money."

  • "It’s heard" 改为 "I’ve heard" 更自然,符合口语表达。

"The government controls the media to some extent, but some things they say can reallymess with kids' values."

  • 这句话更口语化,省略了"level",直接用"to some extent"表示一定程度的控制。
  • "Some" 用来接 "things they say" 更流畅。

"It can help the entertainment industry grow, because making a movie costs a lot of money."

  • “development” 改为 "grow",更贴近口语。
  • "It expense a lots of money" 改为 "making a movie costs a lot of money" 更符合口语表达。
    • expense 是名词 cost是动词/名词
    • expense 是开支/开销的意思,expense是对外的 , cost 是成本的意思

"It can help express and preserve traditional culture."

  • "Record" 改为 "preserve",在口语中 "preserve" 更常用,特别是在提到文化时。

"But the government shouldn’t invest too much in this, there are other things they need to invest in."

  • "Invest too much" 和 "other things can be invested" 更简洁地表达了原意。

"Investment can really help out some aspiring filmmakers."

  • "Help some poor filmmaker" 改为 "help out some aspiring filmmakers",这里“aspiring”指的是有理想和目标的电影制作人,更符合口语用法。

小记 2025-1-25

  1. 写翻译相当折磨。虽然成长很快
  2. 太多短语了,而且简单词意思区分要清晰一些,比如cost和expense
  3. 对AI利用不当,调教的不是很好
  4. 只能坚持每天继续,因为效果好,争取4月前能够和老美聊天
  5. 现在已经能够听懂简单的语句,很大一部分无法听懂的来自于词伙量不够
  6. 已经有一定的英语思维了,形象可视化,重点在前

Should museums be open to the public for free?

  • 取决于内容,如果是给孩子看的,则可以公益性质的免费,如果是猎奇的,则收费
  • 博物馆需要适当盈利,需要保持自给自足
  • 可以帮助孩子深入了解过去发生的事情并培养孩子的认同感
  • 一些博物馆可以给孩子提供拓展艺术科技,文化和历史知识的机会
  1. It depends on the content.I think if it was to show to kids, museum can be open to free,but if it is to just show for curies, museum should be open to charge.

It depends on the content. I think if it is for children, the museum should be free, but if it is just for curiosity, the museum should charge an entry fee. 改进版

It depends on the content. If it's for children, it can be free with a charitable nature; if it's for curiosity, it should be charged. Gpt自写版

  1. Museums should for ,they should keep

The museum needs to make a reasonable profit and remain self-sustaining.

  1. 盈利 make a profit
    1. Achieve positive profit
    2. Achieved a total profit of 2,000
  1. It can help kids knowing what hanppend before, and make up their agreesion of history

It can help children gain a deeper understanding of past events and foster a sense of identity

  • make up 和 build 的区别
    • make up偏向组成 en players make up a basketball team
    • build 偏向建立
  • 口语化表达
    • It helps kids learn about the past and get into history.
  1. some museum can provide the opptuinity of expand their understanding of art,tech,

culture and history

Some museums let kids learn more about art, tech, culture, and history.

小记 2025-1-30

  1. 区分图片
    1. 如果是图片,则将图片中的主要物体识别
    2. 并且以分列的形式将每个词的形容词说出来
  2. 如果是英语句子
    1. 得出这个句子有错误的部分,并分列展示
    2. 重新将我的句子改写成正确的用词语法
    3. 得出口语版的写法
      1. 并分析这个口语句子的每一个词伙

以上部分是Prompt工程的制作方向,在家只能先背背单词了,实在是没能力(硬件条件、时间条件)写句子。故降低翻译频率。

Do you think people in your country have become healthier than twenty years ago?