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@@ -25,14 +25,39 @@ library(palmerpenguins)
 
 # Introduction
 
-You can and should cross-reference sections and sub-sections. We use @citeR and @rohan.
+Overview paragraph
+
+Estimand paragraph
+
+Results paragraph
+
+Why it matters paragraph
+
+Telegraphing paragraph: The remainder of this paper is structured as follows. @sec-data....
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+
 
-The remainder of this paper is structured as follows. @sec-data....
 
 
 
 # Data {#sec-data}
 
+## Overview
+
+We use the statistical programming language R [@citeR].... Our data [@shelter].... Following @tellingstories, we consider...
+
+Overview text
+
+## Measurement
+	
+Some paragraphs about how we go from a phenomena in the world to an entry in the dataset.
+
+## Outcome variables
+
+Add graphs, tables and text. Use sub-sub-headings for each outcome variable or update the subheading to be singular.
+
+
+
 Some of our data is of penguins (@fig-bills), from @palmerpenguins.
 
 ```{r}
@@ -72,6 +97,17 @@ analysis_data |>
 
 Talk way more about it. 
 
+## Predictor variables
+
+Add graphs, tables and text.
+
+Use sub-sub-headings for each outcome variable and feel free to combine a few into one if they go together naturally.
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+
 
 
 # Model
@@ -146,6 +182,8 @@ If my paper were 10 pages, then should be be at least 2.5 pages. The discussion
 
 ## Second discussion point
 
+Please don't use these as sub-heading labels - change them to be what your point actually is.
+
 ## Third discussion point
 
 ## Weaknesses and next steps
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@@ -60,15 +60,20 @@ @Manual{palmerpenguins
   }
   
   
-@Article{rohan,
-    title = {Welcome to the {tidyverse}},
-    author = {Hadley Wickham and Mara Averick and Jennifer Bryan and Winston Chang and Lucy D'Agostino McGowan and Romain François and Garrett Grolemund and Alex Hayes and Lionel Henry and Jim Hester and Max Kuhn and Thomas Lin Pedersen and Evan Miller and Stephan Milton Bache and Kirill Müller and Jeroen Ooms and David Robinson and Dana Paige Seidel and Vitalie Spinu and Kohske Takahashi and Davis Vaughan and Claus Wilke and Kara Woo and Hiroaki Yutani},
-    year = {2019},
-    journal = {Journal of Open Source Software},
-    volume = {4},
-    number = {43},
-    pages = {1686},
-    doi = {10.21105/joss.01686},
+@book{tellingstories,
+    title = {Telling Stories with Data},
+    author = {Rohan Alexander},
+    year = {2023},
+    publisher = {Chapman; Hall/CRC},
+    url = {https://tellingstorieswithdata.com/}
   }  
   
-  
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+  
+
+@Manual{shelter,
+    title = {Deaths of Shelter Residents},
+    author = {{Toronto Shelter & Support Services}},
+    year = {2024},
+    note = {As accessed 2024-10-02.},
+    url = {https://open.toronto.ca/dataset/deaths-of-shelter-residents/},
+  }  
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